And why do half of these sentences not make sense?
Back in my day, journalism in forbes was still shitty but at least with coherent sentences.
edit: A link in the article does inform me of 'rap crew'
"O
n a June day last year, a skinny, dreadlocked 29-year-old rapper known as Tony Da Boss lay in bed in a redbrick apartment on a tree-lined street in Charlotte, North Carolina. It was not the kind of place you’d associate with a million-dollar criminal conspiracy. But Da Boss (real name Damonte Withers) was a leader of the FreeBandz Gang, an amateur hip-hop crew of twentysomethings who were into much more nefarious activities than laying down tracks."
jesus christ. get out of journalism and go write that pulp novel kicking around in your head.
I didn't see any mention of the rap crew in the article... That blurb mentioning the rap crew was really an advertising blurb for another article. It just happens to be strategically placed between paragraphs of this article.
Between this and sites where scrolling past the end of an article loads the next one, media companies are really fucking with people's ability to understand what they're reading.
And why do half of these sentences not make sense?
Back in my day, journalism in forbes was still shitty but at least with coherent sentences.
edit: A link in the article does inform me of 'rap crew' "O
n a June day last year, a skinny, dreadlocked 29-year-old rapper known as Tony Da Boss lay in bed in a redbrick apartment on a tree-lined street in Charlotte, North Carolina. It was not the kind of place you’d associate with a million-dollar criminal conspiracy. But Da Boss (real name Damonte Withers) was a leader of the FreeBandz Gang, an amateur hip-hop crew of twentysomethings who were into much more nefarious activities than laying down tracks."
jesus christ. get out of journalism and go write that pulp novel kicking around in your head.